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Visual or written creation can be linked to your Orca or Lorimer Novel
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We're not sure what happened here, but your production team didn't follow the instructions at all. There doesn't seem to be any links at all.
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Some links were remotely visible, but we're still not sure how a solid white page depicts anything other than the snowstorm in your novel.
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Some brilliant light has shone through and revealed a stellar potential with cool links.
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Wow! What can we say? The team loved your effort and solid portrayal. Super linkage. Better than Polish sausage on a hot bun.
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Artistic effort and precision illustrated a solid process on this task.
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Your mind was obviously on planet Neptune. The work was rushed and must've gotten severely damaged in a storm. Little survived and that which did really wasn't up to your potential brilliance.
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Not bad. You seem to be able to work moderately well. You can jump over low benches with your process, but perhaps a bit more effort would illustrate your true potential.
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Good. Your hard work has paid off in dividends. You have shown that you could pour your heart and soul into this project and get commendable results.
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Fantastic! Not only did you venture out to Neptune, but you came back with vast new knowledge and examples that solidly illustrate your true potential. Effort exceeded expectations.
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Ability to touch the reader/viewer and reflect upon values.
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The content was able to reach the reader but very little reflection or contemplation took place. The briefest flicker of light ran the risk of being blown out.
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The ideas were there and retained, but the light only dimly shone like a dimming flashlight.
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You've made an impression. Your ideas shone brightly like a wind up flashlight but sometimes went dark or dim. Still, this was a solid reflective piece.
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And the sun shone brightly. Super ideas. Your brilliance shone through with consistent and solid radiance. Well done!!!!
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Overall impression from the critics.
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This piece needs a lot more work and effort. Precision was lacking and your effort suggests that you were preoccupied with other courses and pursuits. FOCUS!!!!!!!!!
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This piece was starting to illustrate some effort, but you obviously did not start it soon enough or give the project enough thought to achieve your full potential. TIME MANAGEMENT MAY BE KEY TO YOUR FUTURE SUCCESS!
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NICELY DONE! You obviously put a lot of thought into this work. It is worthy of praise and serious reflection. Good effort. You can be proud of this work.
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Super artistic wonder. You should be in New York, London and Pais. You can do the talk and the walk. Fantastic.
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Grammar/
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The mechanics of your report
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A lot of mistakes were in your report. Get someone to help you proof read your work. PLEASE!!!!
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Some mistakes made the reader stumble. Watch your spelling and grammar. Sloppiness needs cleaning up so your efforts can be truly appreciated.
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A few silly errors slightly mar an otherwise pristine creation. Get a solid colleague to double check your work.
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Dictionary and stylistic perfection. You seem to have solved the problems of the universe and done it with pristine precision. Super.
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